From the deepest depths of my heart,
The darkest corners of my mind,
The deadliest pits of my stomach,
There came first a moan,
And then followed
A low, raspy voice
It whispered to me,
“You are too good
For this toxic
Dungeon of a world.
Spare yourself… Die…
If you go to Hell,
They’ll accept you with pride
And without a bribe.
If you go to Heaven,
They’ll welcome you with garlands
And ask for nothing in return.
If you are stuck in between,
One of them will soon see you
And will relieve you
Of your lesser misery – living.
But they’ll respect you
For having endured
That which we call Life,
And they, Death.
Or maybe worse…”
I listened,
listened and sobbed.
Sobbed hard.
Till I could feel no more,
Hear no more,
Bear no more.
Way to go, Kavita! A fresh, dark piece.
Thanks, girl… Encouragement needed badly…and always!! 🙂
Glad you liked this one…
Kavita this is excellent, Existence, life between heaven and hell. Which would I choose.
Wonderfully dark and move words and image. What a thrill ride.
Melanie
Thank you for your kind and thoughtful words… Glad you enjoyed it, and found it thought provoking! I am sure these ideas cross many a mind (at least once in while)…and hence I thought of bringing it out in the open 🙂
Wow, this is simply amazing. One of my favorites by you. So dark and haunting. Loved the piece.
Whoaa!! Thanks a ton, girl! That means A LOT to me!!!
I am very glad you liked this one…
Hi again my friend. The poem you read was on an old first attempt at WordPress which I did not like. Poetrt I love but wordpress I do not. I am creative but a blogging dummy. Blogger makes it easy. I can be found at both:
http://cassiopeia'sblog.wordpress
http://cassiopeiarises,blodspot.com
I will be posting thar poem to UD tooday
Again much thanks,
Melanie
Noted the links, Melanie!! Thanks a bunch!!! 🙂
Oh Man this was Tough!!…I liked it..i don’t think it dark though haven’t we all have simliar feeling, thoughts
We do get these feelings (once in a while)…
And yea, maybe they aren’t all that dark… but spooky nonetheless 🙂
Glad you liked the read…. and thanks for your insightful comments… they are much appreciated!!!