Pain….

I

Can’t

Breathe

When

I think

Of you

And

It makes my whole life

Turn upside down

I miss you so much

My heart ache

When does this pain end?

Can’t wait more

No more….

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About Dakshi

I thought I was in love, till I met you. I love you, so much...
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4 Responses to Pain….

  1. Tim Keeton says:

    I love the single word stanzas at the beginning – as if you are gasping for breath…

    Brilliant!

    Rhyme on!
    (Thus spake the Undead.)

  2. Kavita says:

    Yea… like Tim said, those first few single-word lines actually make it look like you are choking…
    So very cleverly done! Wow!

    And the ache and pain is really heard thru’ these lines… sad, pining, but lovely!

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