The Dream

Last night

I saw myself

 in a dream


I was dead

and my spirit wandered

 To see,

You were laughing with others,


right in front of my cold coffin….


About Dakshi

Lost my love.. (Not writing in this blog anymore.)
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8 Responses to The Dream

  1. Tim Keeton says:

    Spooky. I sense sadness and some potential impending vengeance coming.

    Rhyme on!

  2. Haunting but I like 😀 Get out of the coffin and start the blood feast 😀

  3. last_lines says:

    I shivered!
    it gave me chills..

  4. Dakshima says:

    Thanx Guys….

  5. Kavita says:

    Even in nightmare standards, this one would probably be rated as the worst to have!

    So well put in this poem!! Gave me the creeps!

  6. deadpoet88 says:

    Ah, chilling, and spooky! Great poem! Love it!

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