This is my first poem for UDPS…Hope u like it:)
Nobody’s Angel
Lightning flash
Pouring rain
Steeped in the shadows of the night
I walk upon the cobbled street
Unmindful of the cold
That has long ago
Seeped into my bones
The steady stream washes away
The blood from my hands
They leer at me
As I step thro’ the door
And cry and plead
As I pull out my gun
I feel no mercy
For these dregs of the society
They say I look like an angel
So sweet and so pure
But the fact remains
That I’m so cold
I’m Nobody’s Angel
This poem takes me in several directions as regards the main character, with interesting and quite varied outcomes.
Verrry Undead of you…
Rhyme on!
thank u Tim:)
Quite an interesting story within the lines of the poem…of course…who is to decide whose an angel.;-)
Rightly said 🙂 😉
Very interesting poem, dark and haunting in a way. I love the following lines:
“They say I look like an angel
So sweet and so pure
But the fact remains
That I’m so cold
I’m Nobody’s Angel”
Goes to say, appearances can be very misleading.
yup…exactly…nobody is what they look like 🙂 the person who looks the sweetest maybe the mad axe murderer 😉 😀
WOW !! That was cold! I loved the style and attitude of the lead character in this poem, phheeww!!! Absolutely bone chilling!
Wicked good! 🙂
Thank u so much Kavitha… 😀