Full Circle (Flash Fib)

Full Circle

in keeping with tradition grand
my life must be found
to contain
peace and
hope
thus it
may begin
to seem like something
worth living and surviving for

I suppose I should have added that this was posted for One Stop Poetry’s One Shot Wednesday. You should check them out.

Rhyme on!

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About Tim Keeton

Flashfiction published by Seedpod Pub. Poetry appears in Read Write Poem 2010 Anthology. Founder & creator of the Undead Poets Society
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20 Responses to Full Circle (Flash Fib)

  1. Tim, I sort of feel the same. Recently I have found much to live for. You never know…..

    Melanie-b-49
    Cassiopeia Rises

    P.S. I know have a wordpress blog under Cassiopeia Rises.wordpress.com.

  2. Kavita says:

    It really is worth everything !!!
    Loved the style you’ve used here … Awesome !!!

  3. so reflective …
    s

  4. Tim Keeton says:

    Thanks, everyone.

  5. waystationone says:

    in the end it requires more than tradition though and we cant just hope it gets better…nice…you got my thoughts a tumbling…glad you linked up with oneshot!

  6. Tesla wall says:

    YUP, That is what every well-thinking mind wishes his/her life to be.

    Thank you for sharing!

  7. anthonynorth says:

    Deep thinking here.

  8. Talon says:

    The word “must” jumped at me…as if the tradition must be upheld whether or not it is true. Thought provoking poem.

  9. heatblast92 says:

    Peace and hope in one’s lifetime to fight and survive for… only the fittest shall accomplish such a seemingly impossible feat. Great poetry here, my good sir!

  10. soulintention: signed .............bkm says:

    Great piece Tim, life is full circle – we must have reason to survive – I love the “keeping with tradition” – tradition built into our DNA…bkm

  11. D.S. Lear says:

    may not always be safe but it’s good just to live! nicely written!

  12. moondustwriter says:

    I like that full circle approach
    there is balance isn’t there – well hopefully

    Thanks my friend for being part of One Shot Wednesday – great to have you here

  13. imaginationzombie says:

    I like the (fib) form you chose to put your pondering into. Poetry is so much a reflection of our thoughts. May the living remain undead.

  14. joan says:

    Tim

    Love your style it is well versatile — it always amazes how unique each poem is. Nicely done.

    Joanny
    came by one shot wed,

  15. Claudia says:

    survive for a life, worth living – that’s strong

  16. Look at all the people! Sorry I’m late to the party.
    This is a lovely mission statement, Tim. I wanted to keep reading, but it ended so soon…

  17. mairmusic says:

    A sweet slice of a heart– nicely written!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

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