July 4th (Fib) Happy Birthday USA

On July 4th, ’76
A country was born
Searching for
Freedom
Found
Within
The people
Who made it their choice
To risk all to begin anew

Rhyme on, USA!

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About Tim Keeton

Flashfiction published by Seedpod Pub. Poetry appears in Read Write Poem 2010 Anthology. Founder & creator of the Undead Poets Society
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8 Responses to July 4th (Fib) Happy Birthday USA

  1. Nice work here Tim. Dig the crazy style.

  2. brian says:

    thanks for linking up with onestop…think i read this one at your place yesterday…ironicaly though i was at appomattux today walking the battlegrounds around the courthouse…makes it all the more real….though a diffrent war, yet about freedom.

  3. moondustwriter says:

    Tim I’ve missed you the last several weeks,

    I’m always amazed how with so few words a message can be conveyed.

    Glad you came to One Stop!!!!

    • Tim Keeton says:

      Sorry to leave you hanging (but it is good to be missed…).

      I’m glad you liked this. I’m surprised the Fibonacci sequence style worked so well with this one.

      Rhyme on!

  4. Jodi MacArthur says:

    Great 4th of July Fib, Tim.

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