Fired Off Senyru

NORMAL:
Sunshine from above
warms my skin and heart for you.
Love grows like fine trees.

UNDEAD:
Sunshine from above
burns the skin and heart for you.
Forrest fire heart

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About PC

Bedraggled Speaker.Writer.Pastor.Poet
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3 Responses to Fired Off Senyru

  1. janflora says:

    i like the way changing the one word “warms” to “burns” makes such a difference. hot.

    • PC says:

      I’m stoked that you caught that because that was the goal and I actually thought to myself “It might be TOO subtle.”

  2. Jodi MacArthur says:

    A sort of Dr. Jekyll / Mr. Hyde

    Ditto on what Jan says.

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