ice crystals
singing
high noon tune
seducing
woodland nymphs
shedding
their shells of trees
filling
fragile goblets
refreshing
fair maidens
weeping
stolen seas
pirated
by bearded ghosts
hunting
ancient treasure chests
keeping
pearls and rubies: Hearts
bleeding
innocence
under
lock and key
secrets
whispered
frosty icicles
etching
outside my window
on winter’s mourning
wake
*I wrote this about a year ago, but I’d like to dedicate it to Undead Poet Creator Tim and his love of all tales Irish.
I like the rhythm you have going in this poem.
Thank you, Gally. And welcome to the undead. Can’t wait to see what you bring (please no smiting!) Wink Wink.
Haha, thanks for the warm welcome! :3
Nice form. Icicles reminds me of just outside: it hailed here yesterday.
Ah, Hail, thanks, Sean. 😉
Go raibh maith agat, JodiMac Og, raibh míle maith agat!
(Thank you, JodiMac the great, a thousand thanks!)
Tá fáilte romhat.
So much imagination from that quiet window. Love the imagery.
Lovely as always, Jodi!
(And please tell us what the Gaelic means?)
Tá fáilte romhat means “You’re welcome,” Margoleen (Little Margo). 😉
Thank you so much, Margo. ❤ And Tim said it write, I mean, right.
Rhythm and imagery are exemplary in this.
Thanks, Jack!